After I read “The Missing piece meets Big o” by Shel Silverstein, I think that has no anyone can stay with you forever, no one can always let you rely on, keep going to find someone can fit you, that’s a hard and impossible thing, so we should try to learn everything, and facing all kinds of challenges and difficulties by ourselves. If you have the ability of above, you can live independent and you don’t worry about someone leaves you whenever. Just do yourself, sure your worth that you can breathe confidence and beauty.
I feel all kinds of bad experiences in the past that let us be strong to face troubles in the future, so it is not bad. When you grow up to meet troubles, you know how to deal with the problems well and quickly that you should thank the bad experiences in the past you think, now it’s the valuable experience to you and get mature in the EQ.
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Hi, I am Jocelyn, I am glad to surf your bloger, the same time I can learn more English writing skills from you, and it is a good opportunity that I am able to strengthen my grammar, so it is the method of the fast learning.
In your article, it is clear to make someone understand what it means, but sometimes it is too vernacular and oral. Maybe you can read more stories; it is a good way to overcome some problems. I want to give some advices to you. The first paragraph I think you can change it to “I think that it has no one can stay” “keeping going” and deletes the word “whenever”, the second paragraph “it is important to sure your worth” that it let us” “to face troubles” and delete the word “you think” and then the article should be more complete.
I consider that your English writing will be more consummate if you keep learning, you can overcome it, do not give up.
Best wishes
Jocelyn^^
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