The article "Changing Roles: Stay-at Home Dads" talks about husband and wife’s roles have already changed in these years.
At thirty、forty years ago、the common family wife always stayed at home and took care with children and housework、and the husband should go to work ,affording all the money、but in the resent years 、husband will to take more time to take care their children.
Social scientists thought when father plays the mother’s role、they treat and educate their children is different to mother、children’s development is changed.
Researches find if children are raised by their father, it can decrease social problem in the daily life, so men should learn how to raising children in the future.
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Dear FakeEsme:
I come to see your blog and congratulation! I am glad to see you start to keep your English journals regularly, and hope you can maintain this habit with delight. That's only one thing I doubt because we don't use "、" in English.
Hi, I am Jocelyn. I feel delighted to browse your blog, therefore, we can share articles together, it is much fun and then can make it advance in English learning.
I want to give you some advise about your article, I think it is better if you use comma better than「、」, moreover, in article “took care of children is better than took care with children” “in the resent years” it is very weird, you can use “recently”
It is OK, maybe you have to notice the detail, and then you will be better in writing skills.
Good luck,
Jocelyn^ ^
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